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For what it felt like you were going for, it's alright. Pretty solid, though kinda predictable. But I'm not gonna pretend that I like what ya did with Wukong. Him being a human? Alright I guess. Him joining Xavier's Mansion and kicking it with the X-Men? Cool, sure. Him being NERFED? Fine, no complaints there. But why did you make him such an edge lord? Well I don't really know if that's right... But this feels less like Wukong and more like a Marvel hater using Wukong's skill set. If the premise was that, everything would be alright and I would have just skipped this honestly. But it's not, so I can only be disappointed with how ya handled the ever so lovable and respectable, Monkey King.
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It was my first fan fic and looking back now, it was an embarrassment. I wrote on a whim and never planned the story and plot out. Not to mention the obvious butchery of the Monkey King's character that can only be blamed on poor research and understanding of the character. I'm surprised people are still reading this crap, let alone posting a review. But I obviously thank you for taking time to give an overrated review. If you want, you can read my other monkey king fan fic. It's worlds better than this.
Of course. I just happened to stumble upon it and it caught my interest. I tend to leave reviews for old stuff a lot. I'll check out the other one then.
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