Review Detail of AnRa in Monkey King in Marvel
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the wukong in this story has gone through the journey to the west storyline, but what is written instead is wukong who are arrogant, has no self reastrained, eager to kill someone, so easy to anger and also an idiot, i know that in this story wukong didn't complete his journey and those close to him died but to regressed his character even make him worse is too much in my opinion. He obviously didn't have his original strength yet he provoked someone stronger than him, other than prof x, jean and other kid who bullied him, the other chara didn't really do anythinh wrong, yet he hated them all the same. The story also advance too fast there's no detailed explanation about anything, the chara feel too 2 dimensional. I am really happy when someone make a fanfic using wukong or his strength as the base and not goku, yet this story dissapointed me to much.
Monkey King in Marvel
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He's like that on purpose for character development. if he was as developed of a character like he was in journey to the west, he would start to become slightly boring after a 100 chapters or so. At least it seems that way to me. We will go deeper into his character in the future. I just want you to know that I haven't misunderstood the character of Sun Wukong. Although i still thank you for taking the time to post a review. I appreciate it.
I think you are misunderstanding something here. You can't just rip off a character from near the end of a different story, then make that character's personality different, and say that it is for his character development. People simply won't like that because it is very artificial. This is not a problem about whether it would be boring or not. This is a problem of you purposefully degrading a character because you wanna do some character development that shouldn't even be there in the first place. Like, you could do character development, but your starting point should be the default personality of the character you are using for your fanfic. You should not make your MC's personality bad on purpose just so you can make him grow. Especially not if it is not your Original Character but you are using an already established character. ... Well, that's how I see it.
_MYSTERY:He's like that on purpose for character development. if he was as developed of a character like he was in journey to the west, he would start to become slightly boring after a 100 chapters or so. At least it seems that way to me. We will go deeper into his character in the future. I just want you to know that I haven't misunderstood the character of Sun Wukong. Although i still thank you for taking the time to post a review. I appreciate it.
_MYSTERY:He's like that on purpose for character development. if he was as developed of a character like he was in journey to the west, he would start to become slightly boring after a 100 chapters or so. At least it seems that way to me. We will go deeper into his character in the future. I just want you to know that I haven't misunderstood the character of Sun Wukong. Although i still thank you for taking the time to post a review. I appreciate it.
I mean projects like Lego monkie Kid have made him not change too much from his old self. it really depends on the interpretation.
KasiCair:I think you are misunderstanding something here. You can't just rip off a character from near the end of a different story, then make that character's personality different, and say that it is for his character development. People simply won't like that because it is very artificial. This is not a problem about whether it would be boring or not. This is a problem of you purposefully degrading a character because you wanna do some character development that shouldn't even be there in the first place. Like, you could do character development, but your starting point should be the default personality of the character you are using for your fanfic. You should not make your MC's personality bad on purpose just so you can make him grow. Especially not if it is not your Original Character but you are using an already established character. ... Well, that's how I see it.