Review Detail of Jimmy_Benc in Skill Creation in the Fantasy World
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It’s good overall but the series is way too slow paced I can’t pay for 100 ch and barely anything has happened nor are there any signs of going to the academy but the biggest flaw is that there isn’t a proper division between ranks you haven’t mentioned if it would take 5 rank 1’s to beat a rank 2 or vice versa so I don’t feel the acomplishment when he kills a higher rank honestly it doesn’t have much impact without proper context from ch 1-120
Skill Creation in the Fantasy World
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Thank you for your review. Your words are absolutely true, I've made some amateurish mistakes (cuz I am amateur) from the beginning of the novel, and the plot holes like power levels are going to be a bit difficult to correct now. But let me inform you this: In this novel's world, a being's power doesn't entirely depend on its Rank. It depends on mamy things like race, skills, experience and at last their rank. So basically, a Rank 1 human could easily kill 10 Rank 1 goblins, but it cannot defeat a Rank 2 goblin. If you have any more questions, please ask me again.
Jimmy_Benc:Also I’m honestly doubting this guys age you say he’s 23 but he acts 10 from the moment the series starts and he still hasn’t matured