Interesting story, but the use of incorrect punctuation makes it difficult for me to read it (maybe by making improvements, it will be much better), interesting storyline I like. Keep up the good work author!
Adaliah_Tempest
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LIKEthank you for the honest review.( ̄^ ̄)ゞ Actually, the punctuation problem was going to be fixed when I'm able to use fonts but I used another (not so preferable) style to fix it xD writing a story for the first time made me learns lots of things and your review gave me insight to it as well(≧◡≦)Thank you again.