Review Detail of Heavens_Ending in MMORPG : The Conqueror
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The writing is great and so is the storyline, but this story is missing something crucial. It lacks real emotion and a soul. It says that there are emotions, but it is basically skipped over. It is almost there, it just needs a little bit of refining. I think this is great though otherwise.
MMORPG : The Conqueror
Temporary_Wanderer
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Thank you for the review! We are presenting our story with repeated edits, either from grammar, context, and nuances. There are some instances where we edit the already published chapters, but it's either to correct some small mistakes (if there are), or better the progress (which doesn't change the story at all, just to make the atmosphere more immersive!). We will do what we can to give the enjoyable but also meaningful story. Hope God rewards you for your kind review! And first review to boot!
Replying to Romance Guy, yes there will be romances later on! Psshh, marriage is not the end of the story! One could say that it's the beginning of the romances...
Romance_guy:Romance?
Temporary_Wanderer:Replying to Romance Guy, yes there will be romances later on! Psshh, marriage is not the end of the story! One could say that it's the beginning of the romances...