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Heavens_Ending
Heavens_EndingLv410mthHeavens_Ending

The writing is great and so is the storyline, but this story is missing something crucial. It lacks real emotion and a soul. It says that there are emotions, but it is basically skipped over. It is almost there, it just needs a little bit of refining. I think this is great though otherwise.

MMORPG : The Conqueror

Temporary_Wanderer

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Temporary_Wanderer
Temporary_WandererAuthorTemporary_Wanderer

Thank you for the review! We are presenting our story with repeated edits, either from grammar, context, and nuances. There are some instances where we edit the already published chapters, but it's either to correct some small mistakes (if there are), or better the progress (which doesn't change the story at all, just to make the atmosphere more immersive!). We will do what we can to give the enjoyable but also meaningful story. Hope God rewards you for your kind review! And first review to boot!

Romance_guy
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Romance?

Temporary_Wanderer
Temporary_WandererAuthorTemporary_Wanderer

Replying to Romance Guy, yes there will be romances later on! Psshh, marriage is not the end of the story! One could say that it's the beginning of the romances...

Romance_guy:Romance?
Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv13Romance_guy

It’s not harem right

Temporary_Wanderer:Replying to Romance Guy, yes there will be romances later on! Psshh, marriage is not the end of the story! One could say that it's the beginning of the romances...
Temporary_Wanderer
Temporary_WandererAuthorTemporary_Wanderer

We will see about that haha

Romance_guy:It’s not harem right
Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv13Romance_guy

👁️👁️

Temporary_Wanderer:We will see about that haha