Review Detail of Rin_Nurnia in the monarch

Item: the monarch
Rating: 3.2

Review detail

Rin_NurniaLv49mthRin_Nurnia

First of all, you can write your author's notes at the end of the chapter or there's a section for it since I expected to get into the story once I opened the chapter. Secondly, there were few of grammars mistakes which I pointed out in the comments section so I hope that could help. I suggest you to proofread again since there were some confusion, imo.

the monarch

Zetronys

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Rin_NurniaLv4Rin_Nurnia

it's alright. It's okay to have some mistakes so that we can learn from it

Zetronys:thanks for the review , I leave the note first to make some things clearer , but I 'll keep it at the end now , the grammatical errors are because of the automatic translator , sorry

9mth

ZetronysAuthorZetronys

thanks for the review , I leave the note first to make some things clearer , but I 'll keep it at the end now , the grammatical errors are because of the automatic translator , sorry

9mth