It started off great, but it quickly turned into a typical overpowered fic that are so common in this site. First of all, he hasn't even left the island and already know all three types of haki. By chapter 15 he can already look into the future... And get this, by the next chapter he can actually swim without any side effects... Not to mention that without him being taught by a sword master can already send out slashes through the air. It takes out any kind of conflict or any sort of challenge out of the story. Nevertheless, good luck to the author, I know it can be a hard writing a story and please don't let this review demotivate you!
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