Review Detail of I_Only_Love_Milfs in One Piece: The Demon of Fire

Item: One Piece: The Demon of Fire
Rating: 5

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I_Only_Love_MilfsLv138mthI_Only_Love_Milfs

Author i like the premise of your story but a few things can be improved. Like you tend to drag the scene everytime and make it unnecessarily over dramatic. Moreover you can use an app to correct the spelling and grammatical mistakes. Do it write now otherwise....

One Piece: The Demon of Fire

GodaSensei

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skyfaeLv4skyfae

I would kindly suggest looking into using an app yourself, the reasoning being you made simple mistakes such as not capitalizing the letter I. This makes me question how you ever passed first grade.Ps: This is a joke.

I_Only_Love_Milfs:
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GodaSenseiAuthorGodaSensei

Thanks for the review :D. I will take it into account to make improvements

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jjjakioLv14jjjakio

You should maybe use it yourself

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I_Only_Love_MilfsLv13I_Only_Love_Milfs

jjjakio:You should maybe use it yourself

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I_Only_Love_MilfsLv13I_Only_Love_Milfs

😥😥😥😥

skyfae:I would kindly suggest looking into using an app yourself, the reasoning being you made simple mistakes such as not capitalizing the letter I. This makes me question how you ever passed first grade.Ps: This is a joke.

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iLoveSexLv1iLoveSex

The MC Will have a wife?

GodaSensei:Thanks for the review :D. I will take it into account to make improvements

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LazyLordLv13LazyLord

Did you drop this?? 🙁

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