I like the story but i feel like Fortuna was not inculuded in a good way. Feels like all she has is a half developed cardboard personality and 1-liners that you can see in any Danmachi stories with some grammer. I also dont understand why you choose to even include her to the story. He could have gone to a diffrent familia of a newly desended god/goddess in orario and with it you could have incopareted some world development to the story.
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