There are a lot of missing things in this fic.... The characters are one dimensional... The OC gets trusted so easily... Usopp-Kaya ship does not sail... Mikita having no reason to be there... Chopper barely has any dialogue... The ship doesnt even have to be Marine Warship size... definitely unnecessary....
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