I saw this in thug to idol so i decided to read the first chapter it had a lot of big words which was cool but the Mc keeps on talking to himself which is kind of annoying and it feels kind of forced tbh but I could never write a book if i tried so good job.
SANHARAKAH
Liked it!
LIKEI launched a chapter just for you, have a look, the MC doesn't force anything, I seem arrogant and I have taken you r advice into consideration but read the works of agatha christie and Anthony Horowitz, that is my advice to you.
Redolife:I honestly wouldn't be surprised if you quit though.