Review Detail of AlModem in I'm a psychopath : How do I take care of children?

I like it, more psychopaths are good for the world. But honestly, there are a few sentences structured a little weirdly, though nothing a quick little edit can't solve. Do hope you keep it up, novel definitely has potential. I'm only a dozen or so in, so it's too soon to tell if you can make us care for the side characters in the warm scenes you've proclaimed. Though I'm certain you'll pull it off and the action will hit much harder as a result. Good luck and carry on!!