Review Detail of Crag_the_croc in Limitless Hell Ascension

I quite enjoyed your story, and I cant wait to read the next chapter. I really like this though I think you should pace it a little slower, and show us some of your world, describe it and it's characters. For example, when the devil reached out to the main character, I had no idea where he was. But other than that great story! (Also this is just my thoughts and I'm not a professional so idk just hope this helps)