Review Detail of Mehmehmeh in IN Harry Potter With a System
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Meh this book has some glaring issues First off MC does not act like someone who has lived a thousand lives. He also has a boring personality like every character in this book, there are no character quirks or any thing to make me care about anyone. Then there is the whole MC is a 11 year old chid “convincing“ ( manipulating) people to do what he wants easily and without any thought or reason. (Examples like when he talked the grangers into letting him basically brain wash them or when he talked the tonks family into working for him for 10 years just for some info that he said he has) Then there is the whole multiple info dump chapters and the chapters that read like they are shopping lists instead of an actual book……… In the end I was bored out of my mind by chapter 3 but I gave it a chance and went all the way to chapter 35 and was still bored. I hope this review helps you improve your writing style author and I really do hope you become better and write more.
IN Harry Potter With a System
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yeah, like Grangers were not convinced that a school is there teaching magic. being 11 and showing them the memory was enough to convince them. He is not 11 mentally afterall. as for Tonkses ,I introduced contracts for that. he signed the contract which must be followed. so yeah ,mehmehmeh, your review is just that, meh.. I am told by some people that I should give more information instead of thinking that everybody knows the Canon. and you are saying there are info. dumps. as for special quirks that would make you interested, I never used the comedy tag. From the start of the book, I have presented a man who tries to do things perfectly. If you had written that you like some comedy and this is not for you, I would have understood. so mehmehmeh, wish you become a better person and a better reviewer.
….angry much also you don’t need to be a comedy to have quirks it’s just different things that make them unique instead of boring
Dreamer_1297:yeah, like Grangers were not convinced that a school is there teaching magic. being 11 and showing them the memory was enough to convince them. He is not 11 mentally afterall. as for Tonkses ,I introduced contracts for that. he signed the contract which must be followed. so yeah ,mehmehmeh, your review is just that, meh.. I am told by some people that I should give more information instead of thinking that everybody knows the Canon. and you are saying there are info. dumps. as for special quirks that would make you interested, I never used the comedy tag. From the start of the book, I have presented a man who tries to do things perfectly. If you had written that you like some comedy and this is not for you, I would have understood. so mehmehmeh, wish you become a better person and a better reviewer.
Dreamer_1297:yeah, like Grangers were not convinced that a school is there teaching magic. being 11 and showing them the memory was enough to convince them. He is not 11 mentally afterall. as for Tonkses ,I introduced contracts for that. he signed the contract which must be followed. so yeah ,mehmehmeh, your review is just that, meh.. I am told by some people that I should give more information instead of thinking that everybody knows the Canon. and you are saying there are info. dumps. as for special quirks that would make you interested, I never used the comedy tag. From the start of the book, I have presented a man who tries to do things perfectly. If you had written that you like some comedy and this is not for you, I would have understood. so mehmehmeh, wish you become a better person and a better reviewer.