Review Detail of Ramses_The_Third in Hatake Tatsuya in Naruto

Ok, this is decent overall. But the summary is just irritating. It might just be a pet peeve, but describing your own self insert as 'enigmatic' is just rage inducing. Just describe the general vibe of the story and leave it there, these descriptions usually forewarn of authors who tend to use flowery descriptions for no reason to patter out the lack of substance, which while not necessarily the case here, is something that might ward off veteran readers.