A good start to this story turned into recycled material and a clear word count push for probably the sake to try and have the story picked up as a contract. if that's your only goal then I hope you get it but there's a lot better ways to get more views and have a successful novel. best of luck going forward, hope you improve on story advancement and much better character development
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