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honestly disappointing the concept is good but not original what I dislike is the character so fake vibes the author tried to make the character a dark mc but it's too much of a flaw like the way he thinks the way he is trying to justify The author hasn't read many selfish mc stories I guess this type of mc doesn't need any justification we also don't want if u r making this type of novel u should know u r gonna upset many white knight and people who don't like this but there are also people who really enjoy reading stuff like this but u did the opposite , u have to choose one side being in centre won't really make this story good and honestly i thought it was a newbie author but u have so much work under yourself so why isn't this polished yet I think that's one point and the worst thing u ever did was giving a sentinet system it's the worst thing that spoils the book and this book has that at least it's not one of the becoming fairy systems it's bearable but why did u do that but honestly the other stuff aside like how quick the mc is leveling up and all are okay just wanted to say this I don't know whether it improved or not

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World Travel Simulator System In Modern Society

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