Review Detail of Sorrest_ in The Villainess Reincarnates into the Cultivation World
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It’s… Okay. The author is clearly passionate, and it shows. They’re so into their story that they seem to be forgetting things that happened earlier in the same chapter. That isn’t really an issue if it happens rarely, but this seems to be an every chapter thing. A good example being when the MC goes to eavesdrop on some conversations in an inn, and then later that same chapter goes back to the inn that they ONLY eavesdropped in, but they apparently spent the night there before? This was on their first day in that world, btw. Another thing is that something in this story just kind of messes with my head. It feels like every other chapter skips over something important, or just doesn’t fit in with the rest of the book in general. The first couple chapters are rough. The entire section where the MC is apparently a villainess, even though they never do anything remotely villainous, just feels pointless. It feels like it adds nothing to the story. The first couple chapters felt like it was made by an ai or something. One more thing is that the author seems to be laser focused on the MC’s eyes. They’re mentioned every four paragraphs it feels like. Course, that’s just a me issue.
The Villainess Reincarnates into the Cultivation World
Nightrice
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First of all, thanks for the review. The first chapters were rough because I had a general idea of what I wanted to do but rushed it a lot instead of planning it out. I haven't touched writing in many years, so it was hard to focus on important stuff and get things right in the beginning. As for the eyes ... yeah I love them that way, ain't gonna change that xD
I had no problem with the way you described the eyes, it was just the amount of times you did. I’m glad you’re passionate about your story, though. A lot of authors don’t really seem to care about their stories and tend to either ignore criticism or blow up at it. I wish you luck with your book!
Nightrice:First of all, thanks for the review. The first chapters were rough because I had a general idea of what I wanted to do but rushed it a lot instead of planning it out. I haven't touched writing in many years, so it was hard to focus on important stuff and get things right in the beginning. As for the eyes ... yeah I love them that way, ain't gonna change that xD
Thanks for the encouragement! There is also not a lot of 'eye' appreciation at the moment, so feel free to read again if you'd like.
Sorrest_:I had no problem with the way you described the eyes, it was just the amount of times you did. I’m glad you’re passionate about your story, though. A lot of authors don’t really seem to care about their stories and tend to either ignore criticism or blow up at it. I wish you luck with your book!