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Parshant_Morwal
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Slice Of Life In Fantasy World

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Black_Knight_
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Is there any system,?

Spirit_Immortal
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bro just don't drop it and check my review

Parshant_Morwal
Parshant_MorwalAuthorParshant_Morwal

Don't worry it won't be dropped. About previous novel, I couldn't correct chapter's mistakes and the dialogues were not fitting so I dropped that novel. This novel won't drop. I promise.

Spirit_Immortal:bro just don't drop it and check my review
Raven_Master
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got two questions one does he kill innocent people for any reason, and does he ruin loving families just to get a women

Davidan_99
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bro 6 days no update...

Parshant_Morwal:Don't worry it won't be dropped. About previous novel, I couldn't correct chapter's mistakes and the dialogues were not fitting so I dropped that novel. This novel won't drop. I promise.
Parshant_Morwal
Parshant_MorwalAuthorParshant_Morwal

Have but will awaken at the end of first volume!

Black_Knight_:Is there any system,?
Luffy_For_The_Win
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Does the grammar get better or do u have someone read over your writing, I.e. an editor? (For context I have just finished chapter 2)

Jonathan4star
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How many in harem

Parshant_Morwal
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I don't know maybe 10 or more. But Harem will be slowly formed.

Jonathan4star:How many in harem
Jonathan4star
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See I can’t do that have too much hatred towards harem that’s five or more unless it’s good or doesn’t feel like a harem

Parshant_Morwal:I don't know maybe 10 or more. But Harem will be slowly formed.
Parshant_Morwal
Parshant_MorwalAuthorParshant_Morwal

Must be above 10 or more women's in the harem. But I won't make it usual harem story. like MC forget the previous one's when he get new women or MC leave them behind.

Jonathan4star:See I can’t do that have too much hatred towards harem that’s five or more unless it’s good or doesn’t feel like a harem
Jonathan4star
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well all I can say is good luck might give it a try probably won’t stick with it tho

Parshant_Morwal:Must be above 10 or more women's in the harem. But I won't make it usual harem story. like MC forget the previous one's when he get new women or MC leave them behind.
Tuanku_Helmee
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When will he grown up? It really creeps me out when he just 6yo acting like that. I’m only read the free chapter so far and i don’t think i will unlock the other chapter if it keep going like this. I don’t know why people keep say loli is a no no when shouta is a go go.

Nebucatneca3119
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hi was thinking to read it is there any r*pe or ntr?

Parshant_Morwal
Parshant_MorwalAuthorParshant_Morwal

no there is not any. read the tags in synopsis and auxiliary chapter

Nebucatneca3119:hi was thinking to read it is there any r*pe or ntr?
blalala_zzzgs4
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u0,,01/0

Parshant_Morwal:Don't worry it won't be dropped. About previous novel, I couldn't correct chapter's mistakes and the dialogues were not fitting so I dropped that novel. This novel won't drop. I promise.
Akash_Debnath_1078
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where is system

Spirit_Immortal
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u drop thids

Parshant_Morwal
Parshant_MorwalAuthorParshant_Morwal

no

Spirit_Immortal:u drop thids
AvidReadrX
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This novel is probably not for me. The novel focuses too much on the fetishes and it's getting more akward with each chapter(like the milk fetish, "forcing" the women to lactate, then make them drink it, then next step making them drink each others milk(through MC, no yuri)), I guess that is because I don't have any weird fetish myself, so I can't relate and it's just me. I'm now keeping the novel in my reading list out of curiosity to see how many foreplay chapter-streak will you release, which starred in cp168 and still going on till cp187 without break or the actual intercourse. After 6CPs I got bored and after another 3 I just stopped reading after checking the future cp names with one "*". Also although I known this is wishfullfillment novel, it would be nice to have more plot in it. Probably exaggerating, but it's like 10cp of lemons and one cp of plot so the story doesn't progress much.