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in the re-write can you please make ciel stong like he uses genetics to become a insanely stong human or uses nanomachines from nanomachine manga to learn everything quickly. So basically him using his scienific knowledge to become op himself rather than just using his machines all the time. Because this is super unrealistic how stand on the same level as ultimate class and above beings because some only respect true strength. I think you made him mid class by himself or something but someone in the top 10 being can easily kill him without him noticing because he would be to fast for ciel to react. Or time freezing powers can be used against him or something like that. You can still do the mechanic jazz you got going on but pls remember overwhelming power and weird unknown powers he doest have a countermeasure for can always easily destroy him without giving him time to press a freaking button so solve all his problems. So yeah i hope you take my advice.

I, human

Magobrujo

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