Review Detail of Chizihn in Naruto : Escape from konoha

Item: Naruto : Escape from konoha
Rating: 3.4

Review detail

ChizihnLv411mthChizihn

i'm already editing this fanfiction,but been busy lately.

Naruto : Escape from konoha

Black_devil23

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CrShinzoLv14CrShinzo

I say stop where you are and re-edit what you already have, it is very hard read and understand right now and you’re using the wrong label and us is making it confusing. You should also stay with one name for your character instead of switching it every sentence.

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johan_alpasLv4johan_alpas

Hopefully you can update the Edited Chapters cu'z these one confusing to read.

11mth

ChizihnLv4Chizihn

I mean this isn't mine. Check Naruto: Escape From Konoha.

CrShinzo:I say stop where you are and re-edit what you already have, it is very hard read and understand right now and you’re using the wrong label and us is making it confusing. You should also stay with one name for your character instead of switching it every sentence.

11mth

AnimeFanfic01Lv4AnimeFanfic01

hi , I am translating it .

CrShinzo:I say stop where you are and re-edit what you already have, it is very hard read and understand right now and you’re using the wrong label and us is making it confusing. You should also stay with one name for your character instead of switching it every sentence.

9mth

AnimeFanfic01Lv4AnimeFanfic01

hi , I am translating it.

johan_alpas:Hopefully you can update the Edited Chapters cu'z these one confusing to read.

9mth