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Writing is good and not many mistakes that make it hard to follow, only long paragraphs and small misspellings. Only thing I’d say is a major negative is how dragged the story is- almost 100 chapters just to get to the meeting talked about at the start which was like less than a week away at that point. Makes the story feel stationary.

Reincarnated as a step-dad in a fantasy world

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