Review Detail of burntwallflower in The Tale of Mysteria

Item: The Tale of Mysteria
Rating: 4

Review detail

burntwallflowerLv110mthburntwallflower

Great use of perspective! Although there are moments when the descriptions don't leave much room for imagination, I believe that the author can further develop this gem. Keep going, author!!

The Tale of Mysteria

Pixxie_Mysteria999

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Pixxie_Mysteria999AuthorPixxie_Mysteria999

Thank you so much for reading my story. I appreciate it.

10mth

burntwallflowerLv1burntwallflower

I can see a lot of criticism in the comments but don't let those discourage you, yeah? You're growing well, author. Keep writing.

Pixxie_Mysteria999:Thank you so much for reading my story. I appreciate it.

10mth

Pixxie_Mysteria999AuthorPixxie_Mysteria999

Oh, don't worry. I won't let it bury me down too much. I appreciate your encouragement.

10mth