Review Detail of MegaMacho in The Bagel Effect

Huzzah! It iz I, the author here! Seriously though, This fanfic is gonna be fire. I use 3 grammar correction programs and I know how to speak and write in English pretty well, and I always correct mistakes you guys point out since my perfectionism forces me to. I'm aiming to have 5 chapters a week, but I'm a medicine student, and man does that takes my time. Story development is going smoothly, so no need to worry, and the character design is 5 stars for sure. I'll be showing you all shades of Spot and how he came to be and how this defines who he shall become. And that's about it. See ya in the comments :D