Review Detail of Blockshot in Internet Cafe in a Fantasy World

My other review disappeared on me while I was writing it so this will be a shorter review. So far it’s a good novel, a bit similar concept as those other cafe or shop in another world novels, but it’s done quite well. Especially giving the system an actual origin / creator. One critique however, is that the author later in the story seems to be using many larger words quite unecesarily. It kind of ruins the flow of reading for me when almsot every, or every other sentence uses larger words where they aren’t needed. This wasn’t too present (from what I recall at least) earlier in the story, but has become more and more apparent as I read. Bigger words are fine if they are necessary to convey, or write something. But when it isn’t needed, it just feels like too much