This is horrible. The concept is not new so there are a lot of material to get inspiration from, but this work just doesn't amount to that. The dialogues are subpar and the grammatical errors are pretty evident. I wanted to give a 5 star review, but I don't think this work deserves that.
Damien_August
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LIKEHi! Umm it's fine if you don't like the book. And, I do know it's pretty shitty because I've only written romance novels before this. System is something new to me.As for grammar I was in a rush. I started the book when half month of wpc has passed.Lastly, I'm not saying this because I'm trying to find validity in your eyes. Or, because I feel bad. You've spoken the truth that there are many similar concepts. But, which book doesn't is my question.According to your profile You've only read two books. Have you really read that much? I doubt. Please read books before talking about 9999 similar concepts You've read.Thank you for stopping by!
I feel your judgement is incorrect and a bit too rushed. The book barely have 4 chapters out, and it is webnovel. you should already be expecting some minor grammatical errors, and as for the story and plot, I find it plenty interesting and worthy. I will suggest you to atleast comment such trash on someone's work once you properly get into the story. Just get lost if you don't like it, you won't be missed