Review Detail of Nikita_Ragimov in Danganronpa: The Tale of Hifumi Yamada

Well... After reading chapter 51, I can only say that I am disappointed. Not much, but enough to make me think about the “advisability” of continuing reading. The beginning was not bad - fast and did not inspire much negativity. Mc just wanted to use the system and reforge his fat body. There he met several pleasant characters, whose interactions were pleasant to watch. Thus, the fanfic seemed like something promising even considering the notorious Harem. But the further the story went, the less intrigue there remained. Girls... Well, by chapter 51 it was as if they weren't even there. I mean, MC got the girl he wanted. Two more are interested in him (and probably even more in the future) but... That's all I can say about all the relationships. And no, I'm not talking about Mc not taking steps towards a relationship. It’s just that instead of showing how they communicated, got closer and interacted in every possible way, the girls simply “exist”. Like footnotes in newspapers: "Mc likes girl number 1; girl number 1 fell in love with Mc after a couple of months; Mc knows about the girl's feelings and periodically thinks about this topic; The girl finally stood next to Mc because he was kind to her over the past time from the beginning of their acquaintance" What is my personal problem? - in the almost complete lack of interactions between the love interests and Mc. Only the Main Girl deserved a few bonding chapters, and the rest always happened behind the scenes. (Poor BestGirl Serenity) I also cannot help but mention the fact that Mc is a deity. Say what you want, think what you want, but he already has the power to topple most Universes with a snap of his fingers. And he has not yet received a random low divine-level ability, for which he saved up most of the fic, almost without spending system points on other enhancements and abilities. I don't even want to think how ridiculous his powers will become after, say, another 50 chapters. It's just not interesting. Especially when he gains power literally out of the blue, without any special difficulties or efforts of will! God! Even his training Arc from the beginning was skipped! Do you know what my biggest disappointment is? The fact is that the Author is clearly able to write everything I described above at the proper level - after all, he has already done this in THIS SAME FANFIC. The author often shows his real abilities, but always, when his skills begin to shine, a damn SYSTEM or another “Adventure” comes in, which I will not describe, since so far these have been the most boring parts of the story. As a result, I was left confused. I’ll try to read more, but I don’t think anything will change - so far it’s only gotten worse. I will also add on my own behalf so that the Author will not be offended by my review. You're clearly a capable fanfic writer, and considering I paid for the reading with nothing more than a cosmic good health wish, I didn't waste my time. At least one evening was brightened up by a not so bad story and I hope that the Author can improve his skills so that I can continue to read good stories for free! Thanks and good luck to everyone who read this entire piece!