Review Detail of dedicatedblob in Return Of The Strongest Player

As of chapter 15, the whole book seems very forced and unnatural. It feels like the author did not consider how people actually react and converse, so they just put whatever script and responses they planned to have and went on with the plot.The MC's reaction to his Mum, then the way he spoke to Melzer, etc. Difficult to read.Also, readers need to assume a lot of stuff. For example, he only awakens his mana after a week of hunting, but there is no explanation why he did not do it the first day, or what the requirements were, etc...Anyways, I may leave a different review if I make it further.