Review Detail of Moni in No Money to Build a Mech? No Worries, I Will Help

Item: No Money to Build a Mech? No Worries, I Will Help
Rating: 1.4

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MoniLv158mthMoni

Could have been a good story somehow. But you'll find it unclear about certain event. Some things are rushed madly and does not make sense at all. No explanations on certain chain of event. Grammar is bad and confusing. Would not recommend at all.

No Money to Build a Mech? No Worries, I Will Help

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AzureConquerorLv5AzureConqueror

Agreed. It doesn't flow properly and sometimes I wonder if chapters were skipped. It also adds in things randomly that makes no sense. Like the sudden system reveal

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