Until chapter 10, the story goes very well. I would like Zen to fight a lot in the future and that his system was not his entire strength. I would like his talent to also decide the development of his strength. The author of patience and great success.
Xerzxes
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LIKEXerzxes:I’v made some changes with chapter 9 you should read it again thank you for the review