Review Detail of RavenCorella in A Chip's Chronicles
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An unordinary premise, an excellent synopsis and cover, and very good writing skills. This has the hallmarks of a great novel even in its early stages. Could use some optimization, but otherwise it's a very solid read. Bookmarked; will check back later if you make it to 100 chapters so I can binge read me some AI dystopia. The optimizations I mentioned mostly has to do with chapter length. Keep it between 1200 to 1,5k; or 2k. Paragraphs shouldn't extend on too many lines, either. Good luck, and don't give up. You have what it takes!
A Chip's Chronicles
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read through and appreciate my story. I can't fully express my gratitude. I also wanna thank you for the comments you gave concerning some parts in the various chapters and how they can be improved. I've already began implementing some of your suggestions. I hope you'll continue to stick around as I continuously work hard to bring to light volume 2 of the series. Once again, thanks a lot