Review Detail of difficultist in Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest

the way your having the characters speak needs to be spaced out from the descriptions you're for example. "hi, how are doing?" a young man waves his hand to a person walking towards him. "nothing much how bout you?" the person walking towards him waves back with the same energy. I suggest doing something like this, the story line is good it's the way you're having the characters make sure to use in books you're planning to make in the future. I hope this goes well in the future as well keep up with good work