Review Detail of UndeadBeing in Summoned to be a Weapon

Hello, this is the author of Summoned to be a Weapon. I would first like to thank you for reading and reviewing my story as you have done. In regard to your review, I have written these replies: [A few problems though, the male lead is honestly a little too controlling. The twins are nice.] The twins are the two female main characters of this story. Rangi, the male main character of the story, does not appear at least currently until around chapter 9. There is a male character that appears before chapter 9 named Cruz Dusti however though they have a role in the story it is more akin to that of a side character than a major character. Their role was just one of one for dealing with what happened after the twins had been turned into weapons yet were dormant until first awakened by Rangi. [the sentence structure, grammar, and chapter setup is bad] I am aware of my grammatical and spelling shortcomings however at the moment perfecting them is not as simple as just doing it though. As for the character set up I have already gone through the process of attempting to make it more streamlined already. What comes next is merely carrying out the changes that I have made to the overall story itself. [went to a different scene, then repeated the scene] The repeated scenes might possibly be similar scenes but the intent is to show them from different view points. [the main character seemingly changes, that or we get a new character out of the blue.] Though to address 'the main character changes and new character out of the blue issue' as the twins and Rangi are the three primary main characters however there are other main characters besides them. I would like to know a little more detail than what you have provided currently to address the issue properly.