Review Detail of ForerunnerOfSky in The Rise Of Islami

Item: The Rise Of Islami
Rating: 4.6

Review detail

ForerunnerOfSkyLv39mthForerunnerOfSky

Very nice story and concept but the writing can use some work and sometimes it’s hard to understand what’s going on but the concept is amazing and the emotions feel real. Everything is 5 stars but the writing quality is 3 stars

The Rise Of Islami

Ink Quanta

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Ink_QuantaLv12Ink_Quanta

Thanks alot ❤️ But Come-on after rewriting it and then still there are flaws to correct 😔

9mth

ForerunnerOfSkyLv3ForerunnerOfSky

It’s okay, some things will always slip through the cracks, your writing is good overall

Ink_Quanta:Thanks alot ❤️ But Come-on after rewriting it and then still there are flaws to correct 😔

9mth