Review Detail of AlFi53 in System Of The Undead
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I can't honestly recommend this one. You know how people complain about wimpy and simp MCs all the time? Well, this is one time when it's right. The MC is the biggest loser in existence, blushing at the sight of a woman's skin, stammering like an idiot and getting taken advantage of by others. Even if someone robs him and beats him up, he will still want to save them. Nothing you haven't seen before, the typical "good guy" TM that is an incel's wet dream. Sorry to break it to you, but women don't find loser Good Guys attractive. The MC is utterly unlikeable and it shouldn't be only the readers who realise how unlikeable he is.
System Of The Undead
Kelvin_A
Liked by 38 people
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I understand this review, the theme isn't for everyone but your review is entirely subjectively because this is exactly what I was going for.Then again, what you like, I might dislike so this is why I respect your review.That's reality, there are so many different people in this world and with it, comes varying personalities.Sure, it's not what you would do in his shoes but I assure, there are people like this in the real world.Everyone have a turning point that make them go, "I have had enough of this," and that triggers a change.The MC simply hasn't had that and with his past a complete blank, I do think it's far too soon to criticize how he is now. The MC isn't a PUSHOVER, that's one and while he might be naive, all his decisions would prove to be either positive or negative in the future but they ultimately shaped his path.I can't drop spoilers unfortunately but it's been good having you.
Kelvin_A:I understand this review, the theme isn't for everyone but your review is entirely subjectively because this is exactly what I was going for.Then again, what you like, I might dislike so this is why I respect your review.That's reality, there are so many different people in this world and with it, comes varying personalities.Sure, it's not what you would do in his shoes but I assure, there are people like this in the real world.Everyone have a turning point that make them go, "I have had enough of this," and that triggers a change.The MC simply hasn't had that and with his past a complete blank, I do think it's far too soon to criticize how he is now. The MC isn't a PUSHOVER, that's one and while he might be naive, all his decisions would prove to be either positive or negative in the future but they ultimately shaped his path.I can't drop spoilers unfortunately but it's been good having you.
Kelvin_A:I understand this review, the theme isn't for everyone but your review is entirely subjectively because this is exactly what I was going for.Then again, what you like, I might dislike so this is why I respect your review.That's reality, there are so many different people in this world and with it, comes varying personalities.Sure, it's not what you would do in his shoes but I assure, there are people like this in the real world.Everyone have a turning point that make them go, "I have had enough of this," and that triggers a change.The MC simply hasn't had that and with his past a complete blank, I do think it's far too soon to criticize how he is now. The MC isn't a PUSHOVER, that's one and while he might be naive, all his decisions would prove to be either positive or negative in the future but they ultimately shaped his path.I can't drop spoilers unfortunately but it's been good having you.
The review itself isn’t subjective at all, ape-brain. Objectively speaking, most people prefer reading novels with a morally ambiguous protagonist; that can be seen from the Webnovel rankings alone.
Kelvin_A:I understand this review, the theme isn't for everyone but your review is entirely subjectively because this is exactly what I was going for.Then again, what you like, I might dislike so this is why I respect your review.That's reality, there are so many different people in this world and with it, comes varying personalities.Sure, it's not what you would do in his shoes but I assure, there are people like this in the real world.Everyone have a turning point that make them go, "I have had enough of this," and that triggers a change.The MC simply hasn't had that and with his past a complete blank, I do think it's far too soon to criticize how he is now. The MC isn't a PUSHOVER, that's one and while he might be naive, all his decisions would prove to be either positive or negative in the future but they ultimately shaped his path.I can't drop spoilers unfortunately but it's been good having you.
Sir Author, how many harem members did u have in mind for the MC? I'd appreciate if you can answer it.
Kelvin_A:I understand this review, the theme isn't for everyone but your review is entirely subjectively because this is exactly what I was going for.Then again, what you like, I might dislike so this is why I respect your review.That's reality, there are so many different people in this world and with it, comes varying personalities.Sure, it's not what you would do in his shoes but I assure, there are people like this in the real world.Everyone have a turning point that make them go, "I have had enough of this," and that triggers a change.The MC simply hasn't had that and with his past a complete blank, I do think it's far too soon to criticize how he is now. The MC isn't a PUSHOVER, that's one and while he might be naive, all his decisions would prove to be either positive or negative in the future but they ultimately shaped his path.I can't drop spoilers unfortunately but it's been good having you.
Hm, I'm not sure yet but I will start small and see where the story takes me.How many do you think would be ideal for such an MC?
JRCaste:Sir Author, how many harem members did u have in mind for the MC? I'd appreciate if you can answer it.
no. simp is stupid. thats not an opinion. thats a subjective truth. and i condemn you for making one
Kelvin_A:I understand this review, the theme isn't for everyone but your review is entirely subjectively because this is exactly what I was going for.Then again, what you like, I might dislike so this is why I respect your review.That's reality, there are so many different people in this world and with it, comes varying personalities.Sure, it's not what you would do in his shoes but I assure, there are people like this in the real world.Everyone have a turning point that make them go, "I have had enough of this," and that triggers a change.The MC simply hasn't had that and with his past a complete blank, I do think it's far too soon to criticize how he is now. The MC isn't a PUSHOVER, that's one and while he might be naive, all his decisions would prove to be either positive or negative in the future but they ultimately shaped his path.I can't drop spoilers unfortunately but it's been good having you.