Review Detail of Honest_critic1980 in What! i was reincarnated in a yuri genre novel

while the idea of the story is good and a bit different. the execution of the story falls short. there are a lot of grammar errors, character all have flat dimension. the Mc of the story struggle seem to breeze though the problem, making story plot weak. If this story gets a strong edit,and be rewrote I will to give this story a second chance.