Review Detail of Kickedelm0 in Krypton Reborn: A Star Wars Story
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yeah killed hos own novel summoning characters that is so op that just are to strong. I mean why summon from DBZ even they are just planet killer and murderes.
Krypton Reborn: A Star Wars Story
VendakSoth
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VendakSoth:Also, you don't need to worry about me dropping this before I finish lol, I've got another work that's not nearly as popular, but I'm writing because I have the story in my head. I'll keep writing even if interest goes down!
I like the dragon ball franchise, so I wanted to include someone from it and have the MC learn to fuse Ki with his kryptonian biology. This Goku is from the original series (he's about ten or so), not from DBZ, so he's much weaker. Maybe moon level at best. The MC will grow to be as strong or stronger than ANY superman in history, so he will be a planet killer on day as well. Multiversal really, if you take into account Cosmic Armor Superman. I'm sorry if this sorry isn't for you, but the summon system will only exist in this story, when the MC is more of a lazy king. Ill eventually have other fanfics that focus all the power fantasy elements on the MC, but this one will have multiple characters taking on different roles. I hope you reconsider and read a bit more, then let me know what you think after the time skips in chapter 20 or 21!
ok i understand that you like Dragon Ball but summening Goku it feel like that you shoot your self in foot. i have readed where there was at start DBZ mc use as power but later chapters the fun fare died down like the author droped because the views were less then 100
VendakSoth:I like the dragon ball franchise, so I wanted to include someone from it and have the MC learn to fuse Ki with his kryptonian biology. This Goku is from the original series (he's about ten or so), not from DBZ, so he's much weaker. Maybe moon level at best. The MC will grow to be as strong or stronger than ANY superman in history, so he will be a planet killer on day as well. Multiversal really, if you take into account Cosmic Armor Superman. I'm sorry if this sorry isn't for you, but the summon system will only exist in this story, when the MC is more of a lazy king. Ill eventually have other fanfics that focus all the power fantasy elements on the MC, but this one will have multiple characters taking on different roles. I hope you reconsider and read a bit more, then let me know what you think after the time skips in chapter 20 or 21!
That's fair. I plan on scaling this story to a very high level of power. DBZ won't be the strongest universe that the mc visits/ has has a summon from, but the summons (and Goku in particular) will be more like peers to the MC when he overtakes them in power. We'll have lots of comic and anime content to keep the action going, and the kingdom building will take place in the Star Wars universe. We'll have a few high tier villains from Star Wars in the future, and enemies from beyond as well. Dragon Ball will not be a major part of this fan fic, more like a stop over. The primary purpose is to learn the use of Ki and boost the MC's natural powers, with Goku as the MC's sparring partner and friend.
Kickedelm0:ok i understand that you like Dragon Ball but summening Goku it feel like that you shoot your self in foot. i have readed where there was at start DBZ mc use as power but later chapters the fun fare died down like the author droped because the views were less then 100
Also, you don't need to worry about me dropping this before I finish lol, I've got another work that's not nearly as popular, but I'm writing because I have the story in my head. I'll keep writing even if interest goes down!
Kickedelm0:ok i understand that you like Dragon Ball but summening Goku it feel like that you shoot your self in foot. i have readed where there was at start DBZ mc use as power but later chapters the fun fare died down like the author droped because the views were less then 100