I have read to chaptor 140 also the aux chaptor. sadly that is as far as I will read,the writing is awesome, the plot is very nice and all but one character is nicely done. the mc erix is very messy and his whole class/skills/powers are just whacky and honestly don't go together at all. his powers feels very pushed and not in sync at all. rin and the other women seem very thoughtful and flow nicely. last but not least the author turned erix into a rapist, the women are just like totally cool about it also. so that alone would have made me not read the story alone, wish I had known sooner. overall besides those 2 major problems, everything is very topnotch and written very well. I wish the author good luck.
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