Review Detail of DaoistSrynko in The Soul System in the Apocalypse

To be honest: it‘s utterly unreadable. I love the setting, and the story might have potential but the authors grasp of the English language is insufficient. Horrendous grammar and limited vocabulary. If you want to salvage this novel you need to get an editor to rewrite the entire thing. As it stands now, the quality is around the level of a machine translated novel.