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I'm brought back to those the essays I use to write in my high school years. I was under the impression that by merely using more obscure words I could impress my teacher enough to give me a perfect grade. This novel is a perfect representation of how to improperly use obscure words, rather than used as an attempt to convey more information, the author uses obscure words to portray himself as an intellectual. Frankly, I also do sprinkle more obscure words in my writings(I also want to seem smarter than I actually am, goddamnit), however it's important to realize that these obscure, more complicated words are more cumbersome to read, this ultimately leads to a less enjoyable reading experience. My advice isn't to scrap all of these words but do be more moderate In your usage of these words.

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