Nice book, no grammar issues, and good plotline from what I've read. It's not my favorite writing style, but I still think it's really well written. The only advice I would have Is something that someone else has already summed up in their review: Don't focus so much on descriptions and try to limit the amount of characters because most webnovel readers don't have many braincells and hate remembering names.
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