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Review Detail of Entrail_JI in The Cursed Trickster

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Entrail_JI
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3.6 First half of the prologue was really good imo. It's the second half where everything goes downhill. Its just... description after description. A lot of commas, and a lot more descriptions. By the time I was done with the first chapter, it felt as though I had just studied for a couple of hours. It felt a bit like a chore. Still, the book is not bad at all. The only reason I didn't get intrigued by it is because of the descriptions and the commas. Sort that out and you've got something. Really.

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The Cursed Trickster

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DryImagination
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omg, it's you!Bro when is your next novel coming out?