3.4 The characters talk naturally, and they also move around during their conversations, which is a good thing. I would even say these parts are good. However, everything else is drowned by an absolutely ridiculously huge avalanche of unnecessary descriptions drenched in fancy and complicated words. It seems more like the author is trying to sell us his mastery over english instead of his book. Becuase of that, reading the description portions feels like a huge drag. Luckily, the actual conversations look good.
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