Every single thing or action carries way too much detail. We don’t need the disposition or the aura of random people on the streets or some unknown waiter. It’s like nothing can progress without telling us how the mc specifically feels indifference about it. This type of writing is called purple prose and this is absolutely the wrong genre for it. Makes the author seem like he is self-abusing while writing every chapter.
Dark_Bangali
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