If actually came to read an evolution story starting from an ant, then you can skip this. By chapter 8 he already evolved into a human.
Zurbluris
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LIKEWhen I read the name of your novel I was hoping it was for some kind of hive like evolution novel with a monster MC. Learning that the MC becomes a human at pretty much the very start was a bit of a disappointment for me personally since I've read too many evolution novels where they "turn" into a human eventually. Reading this comment let me know that I wouldn't be reading what I was expecting based on the novel name, so I was able to simply move on instead of reading and then leaving my own review which would have possibly been on the more negative side. If you want to know all of what I was hoping for in this novel it would have been- 1. A monster MC 2. Some type of hive or hivemind 3. No random nerfs/excuses as to why any powers or skills given get "nerfed" instead of finding a way to keep the novel good while using the given powers/skills to the fullest. (this is often done because the author gives something that has the potential to be much more OP then they expected) 4. Not having the MC make any very illogical or moronic decisions to "conveniently" force them into a situation for plot or character growth (I see this done often from newer authors, I get that it's an easy option but it feels very unnatural to me) I'm not sure if you honestly wanted my opinion or not but 1 and 2 are what I was hoping for from this evolution novel, 3 and 4 are big things I look for in any novel I read.
Zurbluris:Honestly, ok I want you to write what kind of evolution novel you want to read and I will write it, but hay be detailed.this is all a learning experience for me, please reply
Zurbluris:Lol how comical is that, but if you don't want to read the novel that doesn't mean you should tell others not to, after all, not everyone has the same preferences. if your mind isn't made up you can still give the novel a go, after all it can't be that bad if everyone else is showing their supportimage
BoredDaemonGod:bruh....seriously why these evolution novel always making the mc turned into human again, it's too overused & overrated, why not take demon king path it's much better in my eyes.
You should thank this guy honestly, people like myself will read this and pass on your novel instead of reading it and then quite possibly leaving a low rating.
Zurbluris:Lol how comical is that, but if you don't want to read the novel that doesn't mean you should tell others not to, after all, not everyone has the same preferences. if your mind isn't made up you can still give the novel a go, after all it can't be that bad if everyone else is showing their supportimage
Honestly, ok I want you to write what kind of evolution novel you want to read and I will write it, but hay be detailed.this is all a learning experience for me, please reply
John_Smith_3559:You should thank this guy honestly, people like myself will read this and pass on your novel instead of reading it and then quite possibly leaving a low rating.
PheonixRising41:Aiyo anyone know some good evolution stories that don't end up with the MC begging to be human again? Usually I immediately drop when that happens because then there's no point in having a 'Non-Human' or 'Evolution' tag lol.
Ok honestly thatās not right. Heās the author and we are the readers he isnāt making a story to please us heās making his story that he decided share I swear I hate people like u who discourage authors and not actually want to help them improve
Zurbluris:Honestly, ok I want you to write what kind of evolution novel you want to read and I will write it, but hay be detailed.this is all a learning experience for me, please reply
Crazyfoxdog1020:Ok honestly thatās not right. Heās the author and we are the readers he isnāt making a story to please us heās making his story that he decided share I swear I hate people like u who discourage authors and not actually want to help them improve
Please don't give up just because ppl playing it down. I love the concept of being able to insert yourself into an MC. I would never want to be cursed in the form of an ant for eternity no matter how powerful it is. Ant s*x, no thanks. For me I'd have to be humanoid to a major degree. Now weebs who enjoy the idea of having s*x with animals, cat ears and all that... to each their own but not I lol.
Zurbluris:y'all should just tell me your ideas for an evolution novel and I will write it.