Review Detail of Unholy_Bird in Evolution begins with an ant colony

Item: Evolution begins with an ant colony
Rating: 3

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Unholy_BirdLv1311mthUnholy_Bird

The grammar in the story is horrendous and could be greatly improved. The chapters had multiple miscapitalizations and wrongfully placed commas in many areas.

Evolution begins with an ant colony

Zurbluris

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ZurblurisAuthorZurbluris

thanks for the review, I'll take a look at the chapters and make corrections

11mth

ZurblurisAuthorZurbluris

hay if you don't mind could you tell me the chapters so that I can make the corrections faster

11mth

Unholy_BirdLv13Unholy_Bird

First of all the chapter names need to be capitalized better

Zurbluris:hay if you don't mind could you tell me the chapters so that I can make the corrections faster
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11mth

Rashidat_IdowuLv12Rashidat_Idowu

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