The first half is good, engaging, theres lots of growth, good characters, and a nice twist. The second half though not so much, with all the growth out the window, the classic "i wanna be low key for no reason, even though all it does is cause me trouble", followed by the "ill handle everything myself even though it could all be solved easily with help." Then because she chooses to neither ask for help nor even tell anyone when ppl are threating her family, her family ends up getting hurt, and even after them getting hurt she still dosnt tell anyone, even though they are still threating to hurt her family more. All in all the story falls into the classic pit fall of I need to make my mc lose half her iq to force a plot that will eventually be fixed because of plot armor.
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