I do not know what to write in this review. I will just mention that although in this tory there will be action and some sad parts, other than that it is a slice-of-life story. Hmm... I guess that's all... feel free to drop your doubts under this review.
Doctor_Blue
Liked it!
LIKEwell, it's quite simple, you see, creating a harem takes away the meaning out of any story. That is my understanding as a new writer.Hopefully you enjoy the story nonetheless ๐๐๐ฝ
Ryofu:image
Not planning on reading, after many years of reading story I found out that the non Harem story tend to have two problem. The first one is that it prevent proper development of most of the femal character of the world. The second is that it become repetitive after some time and lead to boredome. Creating an Harem doesn't takes away anything in a story except when the author try to make it happen too fast and make it the main focus. So I don't read non-harem novel except when I don't care about the femal cast of that world or the premise is completely "new". For "new" I mean things that is out of the norm, like a xenomorph from Alien in Fairy tail or something similar xD.
Doctor_Blue:well, it's quite simple, you see, creating a harem takes away the meaning out of any story. That is my understanding as a new writer.Hopefully you enjoy the story nonetheless ๐๐๐ฝ
Hmm... this is the first time I am reading such a thing, but I guess, to each their own. I would say that, fleshing out characters is dependent on an author's writing capability, but again, you may very well be right, hence, to each their own. Have a nice journey ahead๐ ๐๐๐ฝ
Ryofu:Not planning on reading, after many years of reading story I found out that the non Harem story tend to have two problem. The first one is that it prevent proper development of most of the femal character of the world. The second is that it become repetitive after some time and lead to boredome. Creating an Harem doesn't takes away anything in a story except when the author try to make it happen too fast and make it the main focus. So I don't read non-harem novel except when I don't care about the femal cast of that world or the premise is completely "new". For "new" I mean things that is out of the norm, like a xenomorph from Alien in Fairy tail or something similar xD.
"fleshing out characters is dependent on an author's writing capability" yes, but would you try to develop character that are out of the MC path? The Harem tend to lead to more femal character being close to the MC making it easier to have proper development. In the end, even a Harem depend on an "author's writing capability" xD.
Doctor_Blue:Hmm... this is the first time I am reading such a thing, but I guess, to each their own. I would say that, fleshing out characters is dependent on an author's writing capability, but again, you may very well be right, hence, to each their own. Have a nice journey ahead๐ ๐๐๐ฝ
well, you are right to say that, if the chatacter is of no use to MC then, yes, he/she wouldn't get fleshed out. Hmm... but harem is... how to put it... it's like, there is not much character left by the end for the females... they are there as a flower vase without any flowers, even. But, maybe I just haven't read noteworthy harem, like you pointed out.So, Cheers๐๐๐ฝ๐
Ryofu:"fleshing out characters is dependent on an author's writing capability" yes, but would you try to develop character that are out of the MC path? The Harem tend to lead to more femal character being close to the MC making it easier to have proper development. In the end, even a Harem depend on an "author's writing capability" xD.