I think this story until chapter 6 so far is quite interesting. Perhaps author could separate the story into more paragraphs and that will be easier to read. I believe there is potential for this story. Keep up your work!
Choka
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LIKEChoka:I'll make paragraphs smaller in size to be easier for people to read. No worries. Thanks for your words and hope I keep going on this same pace.