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If you improve your grammar, more people will move past chapter one. I would recommend that you look at other well-written stories to get an idea of what you should be doing. Also, you need to focus on how to describe your character's actions and thoughts better. Next, you should start reading Wattpad stories to understand what terrible quality fanfiction is. Finally, If your fanfiction looks like something from Wattpad, your going to need to improve your grammar.(You also need to make your chapters longer)
reincarnated as villain
joshua_Hutabarat
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thak you i have bee trying use grammer tranlation in my novel in my, novel several times, as for the character i did not intend to make reason for what the mc do, i want my reader try t find my mc character themself and they can say what tehy think in the comment once again thank you
SecondVoidlord:I would suggest you use Grammarly to check the English version for mistakes. Also try to make the chapter at least one thousand words, also you need to explain the motive of why your character want to be strong. why does he want to become strong, did something happen in his past that want to make him stronger so no one can step on him. Finally most authors tend to confuse the characters end goal with a motive behind their actions.
I would suggest you use Grammarly to check the English version for mistakes. Also try to make the chapter at least one thousand words, also you need to explain the motive of why your character want to be strong. why does he want to become strong, did something happen in his past that want to make him stronger so no one can step on him. Finally most authors tend to confuse the characters end goal with a motive behind their actions.
joshua_Hutabarat:thank you my grammer is really bad honestly i use google translate to change from my original laguage to english, the story itself is original, my point in the novel is not only about the MC story but to create a perfect world condition in this fanfic, thank you for the comment